Hi guys! I plan to post the first three episodes after 2 weeks or 3(It depends on my free time). Actually I'm *almost* over with the first episode so fingers crossed🤞
Also thanks to @n.bwrites for this incredible cover she made. I'm absolutely in love with it❤️
Hey all! For those of you who have read the latest chapter of Kiss of Death, it’s time for a little discussion! If you haven’t read it yet, don’t read this unless you want spoilers.
What did you think of this chapter? Did you choose to forgive Thunder for shooting you? Why or why not?
What do you think happened to Hensley at the end of the chapter? What do you think will happen in the next chapter? Let me know your thoughts in the comments! // #episode#episodechooseyourstory#episodechooseyourstoryapp#episodeinteractive#KissOfDeathEpisode
I am currently so disappointed and angry that there are still racist people, especially in this community that celebrates diversity, the one with alot of young peoples in it, the one in which i have grown as a person in and met amazing people in. I can just hope that things improve for the community and we can get the racist and hateful people out of it. #episode#diversity#episodediversity#stopracism
- Author 👫@disha_episode - Title 📓 Guilty - Genre 🔍 Drama - Description ⁉ "Charlotte being a pampered teenager, is hired with a bodyguard. What happens when she grows a love-hate relationships with her while having the most perfect-loving boyfriend? - How many episodes are published?🔢 6 ------
- How well the story fits the genre🤔 - 2/10
I would of personally put this story in romance. It really wasnt doing anything dramatic for me. - Sounds/Music🎶- 7/10
You have used sound/music. I found these cut too promptly. - Artwork/Covers/Backgrounds🖼 - 4/10
I have not really noticed any use of custom backgrounds, you also have a cover which is appreciated by the reader. - Does the story flow?📉 - 5/10
I personally felt that the story had a slow pace. I wish it was more fluid. - Is the story unique?🔮 - 4/10
It is a little unique but the overall concept is a little boring and can be seen as cliché. - Character development💁🏻 4/10
I really did not feel any character development, You have described and tried to portray development but it really didnt hit it with me. - Choices 📱- 4.5/10
You have some choices throughout your story. I have noted some dressing games. Yo uaalso have some dialogue choices these however do not feel like they change the outcome of the story. - All forms of directing🎞 - 4.5/10
You have used many transitions, sometimes when the character entered the scene and you placed one of these beats the fade was not timed correctly.
Your directing range is varied between basic and advanced, you have directed Charlotte to certain places on screen and she freezes or stops doing her animation.
The zooms are off place as well as the spotting of certain character height.
Speech bubbles have also not been reset to default after use - Does the story have the wow factor? ☄- 2/10
Not really, the story didnt really do any wonders for me
I will be giving you the overall rating of 37/90